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UND-ERWAT-ER

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fef cuz why not

kind of redraw of this: [link]

i wanna know how much i've improved so critiques

although its pretty obvious how X3

Feferi and Homestuck belong to this guy: :iconhussielipsplz:
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

This is a well mastered piece, I must say. The design and background is wonderful. The color hues flow together perfectly. And the curiosity on her face is a great component. I really like the way you did the background again The water and sunlight looks very realistic, although it would have been, maybe, a tad better if you had a source, or a, water line. The, marking, on her shirt could have been more curved, considering it is at her breast line. The marking should be tucked in like a shirt would do. But over all you did a fantastic job!

The green hue makes it look like she is farting